Monday 2 January 2012

I'm sorry..........

Look i know you guys wanted me to post a new chapter because school starts tomorrow for you guys but school starts for me to so I have been doing last minute homework all day so this chapter is more of like a preview. Will post in next couple of days though.

Nicki looked at safaree who had tears running down his face.

Macaiah piped up after really thinking about what he had just been told. " can we go home please ?".

"of course " mama Carol said. The bill was taken care of and they all got in he car. They drove to mama carols house in silence until they reached there destination.

"mom would you mind going in for a second ? I need to speak to errr these guys alone" he didn't know wether to call his mom and dad mom and dad or by there first names.

"of course ". Mama Carol aid goodbye to her daughter and safaree. As soon as she left Macaiah looked at the both of them.

"so. When you said that you would respect any decision I made was that true ? Or is that another thing you lies to me about ? " he looked angry and hurt. Nicki was upset that her son was upset but she had expected it.

"me and safaree don't mind wether you want to treat us like parents or carry on treating mom and dad like parents ".

Safaree nodded agreeing with Nicki.

Macaiah sighed. "listen at the moment I'm pretty pissed. But I need to think about what I want. Maybe you 2 could come back in a couple if day. I Have some questions and by then I will know what I want to do ".

"that's fine " safaree said. " just know that me and Nicki will love you whatever. ".

Macaiah hugged Nicki and then Looked at Safaree. He hugged him and cried on his shoulder. Safaree felt like this time instead of hugging a boy that was like his kid brother but hugging his son. He had never had a moment like this in his life but knew he would treasure it forever. As Macaiah pulled away he said " I love you both to.".

He got out of the car and before closing the door he looked at both of them and said "bye mom and dad ". Before they could reply he closed the door and walked to his house.

They were both in shock. They were both crying but Safaree pulled NIcki to his chest and whispered in her ear " I don't know about you but those words meant so much ".

Nicki looked up and said "I know. ".


Okay so there are only 15 followers of this blog so I think it's fair to ask for 10 comments before I post again. So when it reaches 10 comments I'll start writing ! It's barbie bitch ! Hope you all have good day back !

11 comments:

  1. Damn, this is different. Totally wasn't expecting that. I can't wait to see what happens next

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  2. great chapter...i wasn't exspecting maciah to call them mom and dad, but tht waz cute.. i hope maciaih treats them like parents now..(i really want maciaih to live with them now.)....POST SOON!!(im not going to ask 4 a chapter 2morrow cause i got skool 2 so)...POST SOON!!!!

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  3. Wow that's all can say is WOW!!!!

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  4. Im speechless.... like i didnt expect him to be so calm about it. He's taking it so much better then i thought. Aw he called them Mom & Dad ='')
    Post soon, im anxious to see wat happens!

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  5. aww ciah called them mom and dad...maciaih needs 2 go with his parents...maciaih knows he still loves nicki and safaree the same if not more...at least him and safaree had tht lil moment....POST SOON!!!!

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  6. ciah called them mom and dad :) ... but he needs to live with them and get to know them as parents and they need 2 get 2 know him as a son...POST SOON

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  7. aww nicki and safaree love tht boy...i think he should move in with dem 2...i liked that farther son thing him and safaree shared now maciaih needs to have a mother son moment with nicki...POST SOON

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  8. nicki and safaree know they want maciaih treating them like parents...i hope maciaih moves in wit dem...i think ciah' smad cute..he should stick around in this story...POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

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  9. aww poor maciaih got alot of thinking 2 do...i hope he makes da right decion witch is to go move in with nicki and safaree and treat them as parents...hope he makes the right decion....POST SOON

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  10. yoo crazy chapter... i agree with them people above me thts there son he should live with them...aww safaree mad cute hugging ciaih like tht...and nicki & safaree know they want ciaih with them so they can make up 4 lost time,great chapter.......POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

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  11. He called them "Mom and Dad"!!!!!!! Spazzinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg! WOW

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